Writing Fiction Characters That Captivate Readers


By michal leah

proofreader, beta reader, and writing teacher.


Constructing compelling fiction characters isn’t simple. Characters are the foundation of every narrative, from novels to scripts to comic books. To make sure your readers stay enthralled, your characters need to be gripping and relatable. Here are some tips for forming characters and ways to hook a reader.

Fiction Characters Need Special Character Traits

Incorporating distinctive characteristics into your fiction characters sets them apart from the rest. We call these characterizing details. Consider how these traits affect their personality—go beyond their physical description! Include their hobbies, interests, eccentricities, speech patterns, customs, and more. Balance is essential so they don’t appear flat or exaggerated. Make sure these qualities contribute to the story without taking away from it.

Compose Lifelike Dialogue

No two people communicate in precisely the same way. To ensure realistic dialogue, think about your character’s age, background, education level, and even dialect when writing it out. Well-rounded fiction characters should express themselves with their own exclusive voices that captures who they are as individuals. Additionally, avoid cliches as much as possible; substitute inventive language instead to keep the reader engaged with the text. 

Remember that each scene has to have a point. Your fiction characters should be trying to achieve something or change their status quo, especially with other characters and in relationships. If a scene consists of small talk, you’re likely not giving your fiction characters enough substantial conflicts. Speaking of which …

Construct Credible Conflict for Fiction Characters

Conflict is a critical tool for constructing story tension within a scene or plotline. It encourages fiction characters to evolve so they can confront any conflicts they're facing, either together or separately. It is important to consider how your character would react to various scenarios based on their personality and experiences—would they take immediate action? Remain calm? Freak out?

Conflict is essential in writing to keep readers interested and make them speculate what will happen next—will they succeed or fail? Conflict adds suspense, which keeps readers hooked until they learn the outcome!

Creating remarkable fiction characters requires time and thought, but it gets easier with practice! Utilize these tips when crafting characters for your next project so readers can become attached to them—and behold as your writing comes alive! By emphasizing special qualities, realistic dialogue, and pertinent conflict (among other components), you can create a set of alluring fiction characters that move your story forward and hook in readers.

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